Dear Matthew,
My name is Olivia LoPresti, I'm a freshmen in high school now and I read your Diary turned book. Over the summer I also went to Otakon and also Italy. The way you handled your mom with your Siblings around is amazing. You made your little sister come first no matter what and most of the time you knew what you had to do. I would never have been able to do what you did.
This story, your story, was quite realistic aside a few parts. The way everything was unfolded was quite neat with no plot holes or other such things. Also the way the author turned your story into a Diary or a letter to your younger sister for when she got older Was quite interesting. It made me almost want to keep reading to see what happened. Also the story flowed, it wasn't choppy and the chapters didn't seem to chop it up. Same with time skips, since there weren't many, the Story flowed more evenly and nicely.
When I read the scene with your mother holding a knife to you while you were in bed and giggling, I was quite surprised. But I do have a question about that, what happened afterwards, how did you escape from your mother's insane 'rage'? Also, it amazes me how you could go through all that then write this letter to your younger sister, almost like reliving all the traumatic events all over again.
While there may be no real way to get people to understand exactly what you're going through and how that effected how you lived, your personality, loved ones, and all around people around you, more books could be written about this situation, or have people talk to children at schools about how a mental disorder such as bipolarity or schizophrenia has harmed or changed their life. Children tend to listen more if there's a person actually telling them first hand what happened, which is why I think this book could reach out to quite a few children or teenagers, maybe even adults.
I picked this book because I want to be a psychiatrist, so I like reading about mental illnesses such as this. It does spread a bit of new light on the subject though. Before I thought of the mental illnesses more of a self harming thing than harming those around you, but here, in this situation, The mother obviously harms others around her. Though in doing so she's ruining her life and ultimately ruining herself, she directly harms those around her. When reading or hearing about more mental illnesses I'll be sure to keep this one in mind. Good bye for now Matthew, and have a good future with your younger sister.
From,
Olivia LoPresti